Question: I’m 14 and really depressed Please help!?
Home schooled and really depressed and really need help.?
I’m going to be 15 this july and I’m a girl.
All my life i’ve been home schooled and I’m extremely lonely, I haven’t had friend since I was 8.
my mom says I don’t need friends, and that most people, my age are bad influences.
when I was 12 she beat me, till I had red marks, that lasted for about a two weeks, also when I was 12 I got a really bad hair cut, and my dad said to not be seen with him, unless I wore a hat.
I have two brothers,The one that lived with us my mom used to baby anything he asked for he got,he had friends and mom wnt out of her way to get him friends, he never got in trouble and would blame stuff on me and laugh Any time I got in trouble, he has been moved out for about 3 years he is married, and has a son. but even tho mom did all that for him he treats her like S*it! he ignores her never comes by never call we can say hi and he ignores her and me. the other brother just mover to town a year ago, he lived with his mom. (my dads ex wife)
I found this free german learn website (that I really like) and she said that I’m not smart enough to learn a new language. she is a christian and asks me all the time what I pray and if I pray about, my mom only listens to christian music and HATES heavy metal, I love heavy Metal if she found out I listen to heavy metal she would get very angry! But for me heavy metal kinda makes me feel better,
I don’t believe in god because I was even more depressed when I did. my dad tells me I’m worthless at least once a week. Being home schooled is awful! some times It will be a week before I go out side, one time she even got mad because I read the book “Alice in wounder land” and some times It will be 5 hours before she comes out if her room, I can tell she doesn’t want me around.
The only thing about home schooling is that when I do get out its out of the country. like me and my dad are leaving for germany next month, but that’s the only good thing. and I know when we get back I’m going to ger really depressed Again.
I’m lonely depressed and sad!
I know it was long but what would you do if you where me?
Please no rude comments
Thanks!
she told me today I had a horrible personality hates the way I dress and I do a crappy jo on my makeup.
shes even starting to piss me dad off he said that he might divorce her when we get back from Germany.
The thing about the music is that it helps my relieve stress and makes my feel better
Answer:
Answer by Solyenitse
Hi im 16 years old, i don’t have a perfect life either but i believe in god even tough sometimes i get really mad at him.I think god puts us in this life were having to make us stronger.
Question: Revise my Newspaper Article please?!!!?
Its a newspaper article of the book “in the heat of the night” about a murder so hes the article, if you can please edit it, grammer, puncuation etc.. and please make it sound better and flow
thanks!
Breaking News!
Murder of Mr.Mantoli, host of music festival leaves many disappointed and emotional
Thursday, July 10th, 1963
North Carolina – Mr. Enrico Mantoli found merciless death while walking on the highway of Wells. Officer Sam Woods had found Mantoli’s body lying down on the pavement motionless, around 2 am just last night, while he was on his midnight patrol.
Suspect is nowhere to be found, our respected man Mr. Mantoli has been struck from the behind of his head by a blunt instrument, leaving him to his death. Mantoli was the host of the upcoming music festival, which many of us know and heard of. But franticly Mantoli, was left killed on the highway of Wells.
Police officer Sam Woods, has taken in a “Negro” he has found near Wells waiting for a train, the “negro” was questioned for any suspicion. More information was found of “Virgil Tibbs”. He was found innocent. The black man Virgil Tibbs is a homicide investigator in California, chief Gillespie asked if he ever has looked at dead bodies, and the Negro replied “oftener than I like”. The case of the murder of Mantoli is now being worked on by a Negro.
Sam Woods and Virgil Tibbs, has informed the family of Mantoli. The daughter of Mantoli, “Duena Mantoli”, was questioned about her father’s death, Sam Wood speaked in a sympathy voice, “Were there any unsuccessful candidates for the position your father held who might have been… greatly upset by his success?” He asked. “None at all” Mantoli replied. “I mean really none at all. The festival here was his idea and there was never anyone else…”
Further notice will be reported. Anyone who may have seen a suspect or may know if someone may be suspicious of the murder of Mantoli. Please contact the officers of Wells.
Answer:
Answer by Char Grip
That’s pretty perfect as it is.
Question: Revise my newspaper article please?!!!?
Its a newspaper article of the book “in the heat of the night” about a murder so hes the article, if you can please edit it, grammer, puncuation etc.. and please make it sound better and flow
thanks!
Breaking News!
Murder of Mr.Mantoli, host of music festival leaves many disappointed and emotional
Thursday, July 10th, 1963
North Carolina – Mr. Enrico Mantoli found merciless death while walking on the highway of Wells. Officer Sam Woods had found Mantoli’s body lying down on the pavement motionless, around 2 am just last night, while he was on his midnight patrol.
Suspect is nowhere to be found, our respected man Mr. Mantoli has been struck from the behind of his head by a blunt instrument, leaving him to his death. Mantoli was the host of the upcoming music festival, which many of us know and heard of. But franticly Mantoli, was left killed on the highway of Wells.
Police officer Sam Woods, has taken in a “Negro” he has found near Wells waiting for a train, the “negro” was questioned for any suspicion. More information was found of “Virgil Tibbs”. He was found innocent. The black man Virgil Tibbs is a homicide investigator in California, chief Gillespie asked if he ever has looked at dead bodies, and the Negro replied “oftener than I like”. The case of the murder of Mantoli is now being worked on by a Negro.
Sam Woods and Virgil Tibbs, has informed the family of Mantoli. The daughter of Mantoli, “Duena Mantoli”, was questioned about her father’s death, Sam Wood speaked in a sympathy voice, “Were there any unsuccessful candidates for the position your father held who might have been… greatly upset by his success?” He asked. “None at all” Mantoli replied. “I mean really none at all. The festival here was his idea and there was never anyone else…”
Further notice will be reported. Anyone who may have seen a suspect or may know if someone may be suspicious of the murder of Mantoli. Please contact the officers of Wells.
Answer:
Answer by I DJ Ohio Weddings
Tone down the sensationalism a bit..
Question: Can You Please Answer this? *REALLY LONG!!!*?
Okay,When I fall asleep i usually fall asleep to SUPER slow and sad music. I have these little minisode voices that play,sometime in the night. Last Night I had a dream about this girl that ive wanted to be friends with for a super long time,but im too shy to talk to her. She seems so depressed,and Ive been meaning to become her friend,To make sure she’s happy again,Because Everyone deserves to be happy.Anyway,The dream started like this. I think i was in her perspective,and So everything was black and white. She was upset.She didnt hvae friends anymore because nobody liked how depressing she was. So She was crying inside. ( i remember very little about this dream,this is just the basic stuff i reamember) and so i came up to her. “hi” and i could hear the tears in her voice “Are you okay?” She just walked out. So later in the dream,it was in my perspective now,I remember being in the car,and Seeing her in the street. “Alexis?” and she looked scared because she was out in the middle of the rode,and didnt know what to do. She Looked like she was breaking down. “Mom…Mom…Stop! Stop the Car!” My mom was talking “STOP THE CAR MOM!!” i screamed. She stopped it (when we got to the parking lot) and i opened the door and ran to get her,my mom calling after me and my sister just looking seriously Amused. I Went to get alexis and She was crying,”Are you okay?” and she started yelling at me. Like,She had an Overload of feelings. I looked at my sister in the car andShe was laughing. “Stop! Stop Stop!” i screamed. and Alexs stopped. “I just wanted to know if you were okay,You looked scared. What’s wrong?” i said calmly. Then she explained everything to me. The Last two things i reamembered,was Me and Her Yelling at Each other again,and then me giving her a hug.
This Girl,on the first day of school,Seemed sooo Happy. She told me people thought she was emo. I didnt belive it. Then a few days later,She came to school,Her Makeup was black,Her outfit was sad. I didnt say anything. Then,another few days later,She came up to me,she probly thought i was staring at her,I was really staring at this clock at the end of the hall. “Hey” she said. “Are you like shy or something?” she asked setting down her books. “Not At all really.” i told her. “Then why are you standing alone?” she said. “I dont really want to talk to anyone at this school,They all talk about me…and I just dont like them. I dont want to be around them,so I stay Invisible and quite.” She nodded her head and opened her mouth like she was about to say something,then another girl called her over. I watched her walk to that group. I could hear them talking “Why are you even talking to her?” they said. I bit my lip. “Dont you think she’s weird?” they said. “Well,I wont say she is..but…” She looked at me. She knew i was listening so she said “Um,Lets go…” and walked away. Then Last week, We were in the blechers and i was talking to this girl…and I looked at alexis and said quietly, “Are you scene or emo? Because there’s a big diffrence” The other girl didnt hear,but Alexis Just turned her back on me. I wasnt trying to be Rude. I was just asking. Later on she turned around and told me “Yesterday,Somebody Called me Emo. I’m Not emo” She sounded mad. and Yesterday,The teacher got a call from the office. “Lexi,Go to the office” and she got up and the teacher said “Your dad is here” and alexis sat back in her chair saying no. She put her hands to her face and said “I dont want to see him. I dont want to see him,At all.” that was her stepdad.
Anyways,
What does that dream mean?
What Should i do about talking to her?
and Do you think She’s Okay?
Im the kind of person,Who Loves making you smile. I Randomly,Give things to the homeless. Like Sodas and Foods. I leave note everywhere that say “You are beautiful,and you dont need him to tell you that” or “Your Amazing and Funny and Smart and Wonerful,and One day Someone is Going to Adore you like you see in the movies, Because That’s what you deserve. To be Adored.”
I Help Cutters stop and I love helping Elders and I love Listening and giving advice.
so Please help?
Answer:
Answer by Cesar
if what you experienced in the dream is a premonition then do all you can to help
i have been touched and nothing can do that to me because im heartless but this is different
Question: Please help me with college major/career ideas.?
Please bear with the length…this is the much shorter, edited version, haha.
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So I’m considering changing my major (Geology) and career plan (paleontology), but I’m not sure to what because I have far too many interests. One career idea that I’m [very tentatively] considering right now is costume (or set) design. It’s actually a career I considered back in high school, but at the time I thought it was way too unrealistic. That’s why I was originally majoring in Geology (which I still love, but I’m just not as sure about it as a career choice now). I excel at anything artistic, and for me, art (drawing, acting, dancing, music, writing, etc.) is a way to tell stories. I love stories, and therefore I love books, history, plays, television shows, ballets, operas, musicals, and movies. Even prehistory (reason I was majoring in Geology) is a story to me. When I was younger I used to write a lot of stories and plays, and I also liked to draw illustrated “books.” The reason I’m interested in costume design is because I love clothes and fabric, picking out clothes for other people, learning about traditional clothing from all over the world, creating designs for clothing, designing characters, and sewing.
I’m planning on registering for an introductory fashion design course this fall to see if I really am interested in such a career (costume design), but I would like to look into other potential careers so that I can be as confident as possible about my choice. I’m wondering if anyone is able to suggest some other ideas to explore. If it helps, I’ll list a few strengths and weaknesses.
Strengths: I tend to do very well in environments where I’m given a lot of responsibility (for myself and other people) and creative independence. In one-on-one interactions I can be shy and quiet until I get to know someone, but put me on a stage and I won’t feel any inhibitions. In group settings I usually become the leader and I end up doing most of the work (and if I don’t take up the leadership role I do hardly any work—that’s one of my weaknesses). I’m really good at coming up with ideas and solving difficult situations with results that will please the most amount of people. I really enjoy performing and talking in front of large groups of people, and if I’m put in a leadership position I am very hardworking, friendly, and outgoing. For example, I was drum major of the marching band in high school and I was always the first student to arrive (I often arrived even before the band director) and the last to leave (by like, an hour). I wrote schedules for every practice, typed up leadership packets for all the student leaders, planned and led all student leader meetings, helped the band director with office work, came in early and during lunch to help students with music and marching, etc etc. I also never showed anger or had any kind of emotional breakdown in front of the band or staff, despite often being stressed and exhausted.
Weaknesses: I have a tendency to shrink into the shadows when I’m not in the limelight—I’ll blow the crowd away if I’m the main character of the play, but if I’m given a supporting role I’ll barely act. If I’m on my own, I can meet new people very easilly; but if I’m with friends, I tend to be the quiet, awkward girl when meeting new people. I love to start projects but I never finish any (unless I have a deadline). I can’t sit still very long (I’ll fall asleep). If I can’t pick something up immediately, I let it stress me out a lot (for example, math). When I’m working I’m very focused and I get really irritated when people interrupt my work. I hate it when people try to tell me what to do at work (especially if I already know what to do). I can’t take confrontation (causing me to often be a people-pleaser unless in a leadership role) or critiscism—and I also hate it when people compliment me. I’m really uncomfortable with showing emotion because I have trust issues, and I also have a really bad temper that caused me a lot of grief pre-high school. This often results in me coming off cold with strangers.
Answer:
Answer by Blue Steel
You sound like me! Haha I’m majoring in architecture and love it, so I suggest you look into that, or interior design since you like materials and whatnot:) both require project managing, which you sound very good at, and it is 90% individual work yet you’re around people all the time (in a studio). Also it allows for so much creativity, you won’t know what to do with yourself, and you can work at your own pace…as long as you meet due dates. Both are hard, I’m not gonna lie, but they’re also very rewarding. It’s not like you turn in an essay and don’t get it back for a month, then when you do, there’s one comment on it from the prof – everything is hands on, all the time, always something new and never boring. Ever. It involves history, art, problem solving, and intuition. If you’re truly interested in set design, I definitely suggest looking into architecture, because it is one of many paths you can take with a B.Arch. Not to discourage you from your current thoughts on costume design, but both architecture and interior design have better job outlooks and pay range.
Question: Please i need help finding songs the relate to the book “of Mice and Men”?
So here is my project i have to find 7 songs that somehow relate to the book “of Mice and Men” so far i only have 2 songs please someone help me i dont listen to a lot of music so i dont know any music artists or actual songs please help me guys ~Thank you
Answer:
Answer by dougm
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Question: Backing up the computer… (PLEASE HELP)?
ok I need to backup everything I have on my computer in case my computer breaks and I need to buy a new one. I went and bought this “my book” to save all my files on. I put all the things that I want backed up onto the book, and when I went to see if it worked on another computer I couldn’t access anything. I mainly need to backup my music, pictures, and documents. When I tried to look at the pictures on another computer it wouldn’t come up. I think what I bought was for storage not a back up, I can only access the things on the same computer from which I originally took it from, I cant’ access it from a different computer. So my question is, what do i need to buy so I can save everything that I have on my computer, so if I buy a new computer I can put all that stuff on the new computer. I appreciate any help you can give, thanks!
BTW this is what I bought, and i’m not sure if it’s supposed to be meant for a backup to open on another computer.
http://www.wdc.com/en/products/Products.asp?DriveID=580
My main problem is, if this thing is meant for storage, or if I can’t open anything up on a different computer that doesn’t have the things installed, if my computer breaks and I get a new one, how am I supposed to get all my things on the new computer. As u can see I am just a ball of confusion! lol
Answer:
Answer by FOX
Do you have your files encrypted? You should be able to transfer all your files onto the external hard drive and then access them from a different computer. You should just be able to open the drive up and copy and paste all your files you want to save to it and have access to them from any computer you connect your drive to. Only way I could see this not working is if you added security to the files which encrypted them all and that is why they aren’t available on the other computer. You should be able to check by right click on of the files and hit property, then click advanced and see if the encryption is selected. If it is, just unclick that and copy it over or you might be able to highlight all the files that you already copied over and do the above steps to remove the encryption but it will need to be removed from the original computer!
Hope this helps!!
Question: If you can speak German please help!!! (NO GOOGLE TRANSLATE)?
I need this letter translated into German for class, NO GOOGLE TRANSLATE! Only translate this if you can actually speak German.
Dear, Sonja
I am having a New Years party at my house. It will be next weekend from 9 to 12PM. For food, we are having cake, salad, and sausage. For drinks, we are having beer, cola, apple juice, and water. That sounds tasty! I will be getting my friends gifts to give them at the party. For Martin, I am getting a music CD. Martin loves to listen to music and he recently got a new CD player. For Sofia, I am getting a soccer ball. Sofia loves to play soccer and she plays soccer for the school. For Roger, I am getting the book, “The Shining”, by Stephen King. Roger loves to read and he likes Stephen King’s books. I think this party will be great!
Your Brother, Robert.
Answer:
Answer by La Crucchina
this is not how it works. you do your homework, we correct it. not the other way round.
Question: Please Explain……stupid question probably?
okay…so i’ve seen a music video by garth brooks standing outside the fire (yes i’ve seen the real one)…but theres this other one i saw on youtube
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t330-iWFgCs&feature=related
and i googled “claire bennett standing…”, and i seams like a whole story line exists…based of a movie or book or something??
cuz i found this
http://heroeswiki.com/Claire_Bennet
can somebody explain to me if this is a show/book/movie…and explain..not just “book” for an answer…thanks.
So…do they follow Claire Bennett’s life through all this or or does she just appear in one episode? She’s the main character and this is all the things she is doing in the show? (eg..the train, the video….etc etc.)
Answer:
Answer by perfectvelvet
Claire is a character from the TV show “Heroes”, and the YouTube video you linked is a fan-made video, using clips from the series set to the music by Garth Brooks (which the fan believes portrays Claire and her struggles).
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Can you please comment on this 1st page of a South African story? ?
by galabassoon
Question: Can you please comment on this 1st page of a South African story? ?
I am 18 years old. And Im a scribbler.
Any comments or thoughts about the opening lines of my story, currently untitled, would be amazing and Im curious.
If its utter rubbish please please say so:
“J.D Salinger once said “That’s the whole trouble. You can’t ever find a place that’s nice and peaceful, because there isn’t any. You may think there is, but once you get there, when you’re not looking, somebody’ll sneak up and write “Fuck you” right under your nose.” In school it couldn’t be truer. In life it couldn’t be truer. And in South Africa it couldn’t be more of a perfect motto. One may feel obliged to start an adolescent story the way Holden did, with a lot of cussing and a lot of superior prestige. But no, mine begins with a classroom and an admirer. Chewing pencils, but with a perfectly ironed blazer and filled with hope I knew what I wanted from my education and I pursued it, in full confidence of who I was…Until I walked into her classroom.
A private all girls’ school stands tall at the top of the hill and it is what I call home and my foundation. The smell of chlorine in the morning and the stings of grass being mowed as you walked on the pathway, it was the perfect institution for self-exploration. Like the exterior beautification qualified polished ancient wisdom, the roses bloomed in a semi-circle around the fountain, the gates rich blue and the lights hang luminously large as the perimeter. The fountain herself, a bronzed ballerina, arms reaching forward, towards the city, but more so I believe, towards the sky. Her name is Rose Ella, naturally surrounded by bunched fiery red flowers of her namesake all dotted and packed around her, almost as if trying too hard. The entrance further established a pride in heritage and yet at the same time a sense of forward motion, two large gates and on each side at the top, one half of the shape of a hat, when closed they meet each other and a large brimmed symbol of the school stood greeting the young ladies. During the hot days of the Southern African sun the windows of the boarding establishment and the music centre glistened and winked at the city below and the buildings winked back in flirtatious return. Almost bubbled, this tall candle, “the light at the top of the hill” is a mark of a grand nation, one that was possible but fading quickly. Who would have known or cared that 5kms away lay the township of Sobanto where not much had changed since before 1994 except they have turned off the large street lamps with video cameras at the top of them so that the police could ensure that the blacks were kept in check. But otherwise the people live as they’ve lived, maybe more gardens, a jungle gym or two, but 15 years later and the schools are still missing flowers and books and teachers. South Africa’s infamous two-tiered educational system still bearing the badge of the Apartheid principle, the ways of ANC governance are like children left in the middle of the Royal Show funfair without care or parental control because they refused to admit it was getting dark…the Madiba years are now in the history books.”
(theres a bit more but I doubt anyone wants to read more. Hope I can get at least 1 answerer, seriously doubt that)
Having background SA info is pretty much esssential
Thanks to “the duck” and “Tashi”, really I need MORE of this kind of constructive commenting. Soo do you think its worth me joining a writing group?? Mmmm..how to find one is the question..
1 more question: Do you think I need to “flesh it out” a bit?? I mean thats what I think! More strectched??
Tashi if you might read this again: emails are welcome (and helpful)
sahara.nankan@gmail.com (my name)
Answer:
Answer by The Duck [Happy CNY!]
It’s a beautiful, easy read with some problems.
First, spelling and grammar.
Second, you jump around. Your school description suddenly becomes a description of some town 5km away. It doesn’t flow.
Third, the tone of this passage “J.D Salinger once said ….superior prestige.” is more suited for a formal essay than a story, especially the narrator referring to herself (her, right?) as “One”. Make that passage more casual and it will be great. Also, this line “Like the exterior beautification qualified polished ancient wisdom” makes no sense. “Until I walked into her classroom” doesn’t either, because you don’t usually refer to school as she so I thought you were talking about a girl.
Fourth, you have many unnecessary words.
Clean it up and it has potential. Good job.